Creative Writing Club intro

Blank and empty

Desolate and alone

Barren and solitary

 feeling that would have crashed

like a wave on the rocky shores

If not the absence of feeling

Derrive of emotion

Past the border of calm

unresponsive, uncaring and stoic

sitting the there

in the middle of the room

there and not

listening to everything

but not caring to retain

or recieve any of the information

Past the point of infuriating

seemingly infinite rage

Past the point of unyeilding

and melancholic emotional unrest

Unfeeling towards the sharp

and pain causing words that slash

like knives upon deaf ears
unspeaking tongues and blind unseeing eyes

I suppose this should be an intro or one of the forever loved 'about me' pages, but do you really need to know about me to know that I write, or to judge my writing? If I tell you about myself before you read, are you not, on some subconscious level judging me?
You'll most likely say no, but some thing as simple as the fact that am constantly by myself or dislike people in general changes they way you would see me by myself or read something I write about solitude. Why read an 'About Me' page if you've already formed your opinion?